Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Irony of similar thoughts


A house with a swimming pool,
with a name board carved in gold
was life is what they thought.
Sacrificing their love for a limousine
didn't seem a sacrifice at all.
Life's journey made them
take different paths,
Walking on a lonely road wasn't
difficult, right from start.

Each passing day made them
regret choosing their own path.
Both felt Life would have been
better if they had killed the love
in their heart, right from the start".

Another couple watched the moon lit sky
with a sweet wind passing by,
For their house didn't have a roof.

Love had brought them together,
They had two lovely kids
And a lovely family.
Each day they had to struggle
hard to make end meets.
They yearned for a limousine and
A house with the name board carved in gold.

Both felt Life would have been
better if they had killed the love
in their heart, right from the start".







3 comments:

Sindhu V said...

Leavin behind love for limousine!!!And then thinkin they ve acheived sumthing....!!!
Some are foolish,really!!
And U said it here, clearly!!!!

Aravindh K said...

hey superb job! I'm finally being able to appreciate poetry! nice flow of thoughts....nice contrasting

Deepika said...

EXCELLENT!